Spelfouten? - Stamcafé

Ik ben niet zo heeel goed in Engels. En nu wil ik even jullie hulp.
Of mijn eerste gedicht goed geschreven is? Alvast bedankt:

Life is so hard and unfair,
You would know the truth,
But the truth is hard,
Precious people go away,
You learn from your mistakes,
And you learn how to live,
You got to know how to love,
And learn how to forget,
Somethings can't change,
They keep the same,
Some people live in youre memory,
The heart is broken,
And its raining in youre heart,
Thaughts comming up,
Tears roll on youre face,
You want run away,
Far from everything,
Far from youre fears,
They won't leave you alone.

[ bericht aangepast op 25 juni 2011 - 11:55 ]

Follow your dreams. They know the way.

Life is so hard and unfair,
You would know the truth,
But the truth is hard,
Precious people go away,
You learn from your mistakes,
And you learn how to live,
You get to know how to love,
And learn how to forget,
Some things can't change,
They keep the same,
Some people live in your memory,
The heart is broken,
And it's raining in your heart,
Thoughts coming up,
Tears roll on your face,
You want to run away,
Far from everything,
Far from your fears,
They won't leave you alone.

[ bericht aangepast op 25 juni 2011 - 12:05 ]

Her heart was a secret garden and the walls were very high.

Aria schreef:
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Volgensmij is dit hem, (:

Follow your dreams. They know the way.

Opinion schreef:
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Bedankt!

Her heart was a secret garden and the walls were very high.

Aria schreef:
(...)

Alsjeblieft, (:

Follow your dreams. They know the way.