Unshown - Gedichten promoten

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  • 23 juli 2016 - 15:44   Arcturus is offline
    Arcturus
    Arcturus 23120

    unshown

    Ik heb dit korte gedicht en filmpje gemaakt op mijn vakantie in Berlijn en ik wilde het even met jullie delen gezien het de eerste keer is dat ik zoiets op de manier doe. Ik ben benieuwd of het werkt en daarnaast ben ik net pas weer begonnen met gedichten schrijven dus dat is ook wel leuk om te laten zien.

    unshown

    no faces
    no fake smiles
    no flaws
    only thought
    only senses
    only sounds
    the dark covers up
    makes edges smooth
    hides the pain

    faces
    fake smiles
    flaws
    the light is blinding
    the light shows and hides the truth
    edges become sharp again
    ugliness shows
    uncomfortable
    self-conscious
    lights

    go back to the dark
    go back to the safe place
    no faces
    no fake smiles
    no flaws
    the darkness makes you feel what the light won’t
    things that occur in the dark
    are blinding in the light
    experiences in the unshown
    are mistakes when seen

    go back to the dark
    turn off the light
    stay in the dark
    with your thoughts
    experiences
    no shame
    no pain
    no faces
    no fake smiles
    no flaws

    only
    wonder

    My fake plants died, because I did not pretend to water them.

    23 juli 2016 - 15:56   Paesano is offline
    Paesano
    Paesano 15159

    I love it! ;o

    That is a perfect copy of reality.

    23 juli 2016 - 16:17   Founder is offline
    Founder
    Founder 3016

    Cool!

    I wanna be a wizard!

    23 juli 2016 - 16:37   Eilandpiraat is offline
    Eilandpiraat
    Eilandpiraat 4618

    Wauw, heel mooi!

    Spinning around, I'm weightless.

    24 juli 2016 - 14:44   Linkle is offline
    Linkle
    Linkle 45598

    Woah, dit is zo mooi!

    Egal was kommt, es wird gut, sowieso. Immer geht 'ne neue Tür auf, irgendwo.

    24 juli 2016 - 15:51   Vulgrim is offline
    Vulgrim
    Vulgrim 37915

    Leuk bedacht tho.

    Don't walk. Run, you sheep, run.

    24 juli 2016 - 16:05   Arcturus is offline
    Arcturus
    Arcturus 23120

    Thank you guys (:

    My fake plants died, because I did not pretend to water them.




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