• Proof of innocence - 5SOS


    How would you feel if you had to go to jail, when you hadn't done anything wrong?
    They think you're guilty, just because you were the last person.
    The last person that had seen her.
    Or just because you're a bad guy.
    Well, I can tell you how it feels.
    It sucks
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    I have to know what happened.
    I just know they didn't do it.
    I will figure it out and proof that they are innocent






    x Made bySweetdemon and Music4lifexx x started 23-06-2014 x ended ..-..-.. x 5SOS fanfic x triller x 16+ x grof taalgebruik





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    [ bericht aangepast op 23 juni 2014 - 21:57 ]


    Music is my escape from Bullshit in life <3

    Het helpt misschien als je de fout in de titel verbetert ^^
    Het is innocence en innocent ^^


    But I still have this faith in the truth of my dreams.

    Kawena schreef:
    Het helpt misschien als je de fout in de titel verbetert ^^
    Het is innocence en innocent ^^

    En de rest van de fouten in de proloog(?). Waar gaat het verhaal over?


    "She was fury, she was wrath, she was vengeance."

    Val schreef:
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    En de rest van de fouten in de proloog(?). Waar gaat het verhaal over?


    welke fouten zijn het, dan kan ik ze eruit halen?


    Music is my escape from Bullshit in life <3

    Music4lifexx schreef:
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    welke fouten zijn het, dan kan ik ze eruit halen?


    How would you feel... When you have to go to jail, while you didn't do anything wrong?
    They think you're guilty, just because you were the last person.
    The last person that had seen her.
    Or just because you're a bad guy.
    Well, I can tell you how it feels.
    It sucks.

    Ik heb het zo goed mogelijk verbeterd voor je, het kan zijn dat er nog een foutje in zit.


    Dear Molly. Watching over Fred like you have been watching over Harry all these years. Love, Lily.

    Oli schreef:
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    How would you feel... When you have to go to jail, while you didn't do anything wrong?
    They think you're guilty, just because you were the last person.
    The last person that had seen her.
    Or just because you're a bad guy.
    Well, I can tell you how it feels.
    It sucks.

    Ik heb het zo goed mogelijk verbeterd voor je, het kan zijn dat er nog een foutje in zit.


    How would you feel if you had to go to jail, when you hadn't done anything wrong?
    They think you're guilty, just because you were the last person.
    The last person that had seen her.
    Or just because you're a bad guy.
    Well, I can tell you how it feels.
    It sucks.


    Nog wat verbeterd ^^


    But I still have this faith in the truth of my dreams.

    thanks voor de hulp :)


    Music is my escape from Bullshit in life <3

    Kawena schreef:
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    How would you feel if you had to go to jail, when you hadn't done anything wrong?
    They think you're guilty, just because you were the last person.
    The last person that had seen her.
    Or just because you're a bad guy.
    Well, I can tell you how it feels.
    It sucks.


    Nog wat verbeterd ^^


    Misschien een domme vraag, maar moet het niet haven't zijn? Ik weet niet, hadn't klinkt/staat zo raar.


    Physics is awesome

    Tuk schreef:
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    Misschien een domme vraag, maar moet het niet haven't zijn? Ik weet niet, hadn't klinkt/staat zo raar.


    Omdat alles in de verleden tijd staat :')
    "Wat zou je doen als je naar de gevangenis zou moeten, ook al had je niets misdaan?" Dat is eigenlijk een irrealis.


    But I still have this faith in the truth of my dreams.

    -> Ik heb de spelfout uit je titel gehaald.


    "Her heart was a secret garden, and the walls were very high."

    Hartnett schreef:
    -> Ik heb de spelfout uit je titel gehaald.


    Dank je!


    Music is my escape from Bullshit in life <3