Engelse brief. - School

[ bericht aangepast op 29 nov 2017 - 20:37 ]

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<3

My name is Marloes Bouw and I’m 16 years old. I life in Holland and read your advert in de Telegraag. I write this letter because I would really like if my family would be a host family.

I live in a town ...

I am a girl. I am 1.55 tall.

Dingen zoals it's moet je altijd als: it is, schrijven.

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To infinity and beyond •

I’m a girl.Me height is 1.55. I’ve got brown hair my eyes color is blue-grey. My hobbies are

[ bericht aangepast op 10 jan 2012 - 10:05 ]

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I let him go. And. It. Felt. So. Damn. Good.

Ik zie wel wat grammaticafoutjes, zoals deze hierboven en de volgende:
My name is Marloes Bouw and I’m 16 years old. I life in Holland and have read your advert in de Telegraag.

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Your make-up is terrible

’ve got brown hair my eyes color is blua-gray.

I have brown hair and the color of my eyes is blue-grey.

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To infinity and beyond •

Volgens mij bedoel je ook nog Telegraaf en niet Telegraag ;p

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I let him go. And. It. Felt. So. Damn. Good.

Nou, ik heb hem even utigetyped zoals ik hem zelf zou schrijven, wat fouten er uit gehaald, zinnen wat anders gezet... Ik kan niet garanderen dat hij foutloos is, maar mijn engels is toch wel behoorlijk goed.

My name is Marloes Bouw and I'm 16 years old. I live in The Netherlands and have read your advert in the Telegraaf. I am writing this letter because I would really like it if my family would become a host family.

I would like it if someone came over and would stay with me for the summer. My summer holiday starts on the 28th of May. Because of exams, my summer holiday will be longer than normally.

I live in a town not far away from Eindhoven. Our neighborhood is calm and we live in an old detached house with much ambience. Eindhoven is a city with a population of 216.157 people. The city is located in North-Brabant. The best-known soccer team of Eindhoven is PSV.

I’m a girl. My height is 1,55 meters.. I’ve got brown hair, and my eyecolor is blue-grey. My hobbies are fitness, playing soccer and hanging out with my friends. I included a picture of myself with this letter.

I hope it is not a problem for me to ask you some questions, and i hope you will answer them.
How long would the boy or girl stay in Holland?
How old would the person be?
Why can’t the children go by theirselves on vacation?

The boy or girl is really welcome and I really hope someone is coming to stay.

Yours sincerely,

Marloes Bouw

[ bericht aangepast op 10 jan 2012 - 10:30 ]

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Welcome to Night Vale. All Hail the Glow Cloud. All Hail Perfect, Beautiful Carlos.

Saph schreef:
Nou, ik heb hem even utigetyped zoals ik hem zelf zou schrijven, wat fouten er uit gehaald, zinnen wat anders gezet... Ik kan niet garanderen dat hij foutloos is, maar mijn engels is toch wel behoorlijk goed.

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Zoals hier dus ong. staat, al zou ik de I would like it hier: I would like it if someone came over and would stay with me for the summer. My summer holiday starts on the 28th of May. Because of exams, my summer holiday will be longer than normally.

Veranderen in iets anders, om een beetje woordvariatie te hebben aangezien je die chunck even daarvoor ook gebruikte