Wil iemand dit voor me verbeteren :3? - School

We moesten een klein dialoogje doen voor de klas en ik vroeg of iemand van jullie dit kan verbeteren, zodat ik goede puntjes haal ? Ohja en als iemand weet hoe je ontsmettingspray noemt in het Engels...?

- Hello Doctor, could you help me, please?
x Ofcourse. Let me see.
- It's my hand. It's bleeding and it hurts a little.
x That doesn't look good. What happened to you?
- It's quite of a strange story.
x It's better if you tell me, so I can help you better.
- Well, I rode the bike to school when a cate came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to serve the cat and then I fell to the ground.
x But your wound is really deep. Was there something lying on the round?
- Yes, a piece of glass.
x I see. I think we need to stitch you. The wound is too deep.
- Really? I think that's unnecessary. It doesn't hurt that much.
x I'm sorry, but it's really necessary. I'm gonna take some disinfectant spray to clean it up. It will hurt a little bit.
- Do I need many stiches?
x No. I think two shoud be enough.
Well, here you go. Don't forget to clean the wound a couple times a day. And change the bandage everyday.
- Ofcourse, thank you doctor!
- You're welcome. Be careful next time!
- I will.

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Olive

[ bericht aangepast op 27 sep 2011 - 19:06 ]

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Then I defy thee, stars. Romeo Montague

volgens mij is het meeste wel goed hoor .
Well, I rode the bike to school when a cate Cat came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to serve the cat and then I fell to the ground.

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"Because I'm with you until the end of the line." - Stucky

- Hello Doctor, could you help me, please?
x Ofcourse. Let me see. What's wrong?
- It's my hand. It's bleeding and it hurts a little.
x That doesn't too look good. What happened to you?
- It's quite of a strange story.
x It's better if you tell me, so then I can help you better.
- Well, I rode the bike was cycling to school when a cat came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to serve avoid the cat and then I fell to the ground.
x But your wound is really deep. Was there something lying on the round?
- Yes there was, a piece of glass.
x I see. I think we need to stitch youit, beacuse the wound is too deep.
- Really? I think that's unnecessary. It doesn't hurt that much.
x I'm sorry, but it's really necessary. I'm gonnagoing to take some disinfectant spray(geen idee hoe je het zegt) to clean it upso the bacteria will be dead/killed/whatever. It will hurt a little bit.
- Do I need many stiches?
x No. I think two shoud be enough.
Well, there you go. Don't forget to clean the wound a couple times a day. And change the bandage everyday. Don't forget to desinfet about three times a day and the bandage has to be changed everyday.
- Ofcourse, thank you doctor!
- You're welcome. Be careful next time!
- I will.



Well.. hopelijk heb ik het goed verbeterd, want moet dit jaar wel mijn Cambridge examen halen en dan moet ik dit wel weten :'D
(Als je wilt weten waarom iets fout is moet je het even zeggen, leg ik het uit. Want I rode a bike is wel een huge mistake voor als je 15 bent en dus in de 3e/4e zit)

[ bericht aangepast op 27 sep 2011 - 19:03 ]

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In the end the only person we love is ourselves, that's why we choose to love someone who can please us the most.

- Do I need many stiches?
x No. I think two should be enough.

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If you think something small can’t make a difference, try sleeping with a mosquito in the room

Endure schreef:
- Hello Doctor, could you help me, please?
x Ofcourse. Let me see. What's wrong?
- It's my hand. It's bleeding and it hurts a little.
x That doesn't too look good. What happened to you?
- It's quite of a strange story.
x It's better if you tell me, so then I can help you better.
- Well, I rode the bike was cycling to school when a cat came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to serve avoid the cat and then I fell to the ground.
x But your wound is really deep. Was there something lying on the round?
- Yes there was, a piece of glass.
x I see. I think we need to stitch youit, beacuse the wound is too deep.
- Really? I think that's unnecessary. It doesn't hurt that much.
x I'm sorry, but it's really necessary. I'm gonnagoing to take some disinfectant spray(geen idee hoe je het zegt) to clean it upso the bacteria will be dead/killed/whatever. It will hurt a little bit.
- Do I need many stiches?
x No. I think two shoud be enough.
Well, there you go. Don't forget to clean the wound a couple times a day. And change the bandage everyday. Don't forget to desinfet about three times a day and the bandage has to be changed everyday.
- Ofcourse, thank you doctor!
- You're welcome. Be careful next time!
- I will.



Well.. hopelijk heb ik het goed verbeterd, want moet dit jaar wel mijn Cambridge examen halen en dan moet ik dit wel weten :'D
(Als je wilt weten waarom iets fout is moet je het even zeggen, leg ik het uit. Want I rode a bike is wel een huge mistake voor als je 15 bent en dus in de 3e/4e zit)

Ik snap die Too niet, aan het begin?
Die moet daar niet staan -inhoudelijk- en als je hem toch plaatst, staat ie verkeerd...

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But I still have this faith in the truth of my dreams.

Ik heb nog even een paar spellingsfoutjes verbeterd, zo zou het goed moeten zijn.

Endure schreef:
- Hello Doctor, could you help me, please?
x Ofcourse. Let me see. What's wrong?
- It's my hand. It's bleeding and it hurts a little.
x That doesn't look too good. What happened to you?
- It's quite of a strange story.
x It's better if you tell me, so then I can help you better.
- Well, I rode the bike was cycling to school when a cat came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to serve avoid the cat and then I fell to the ground.
x But your wound is really deep. Was there something lying on the round?
- Yes there was, a piece of glass.
x I see. I think we need to stitch youit, because the wound is too deep.
- Really? I think that's unnecessary. It doesn't hurt that much.
x I'm sorry, but it's really necessary. I'm gonnagoing to take some disinfectant spray(geen idee hoe je het zegt) to clean it upso the bacteria will be dead/killed/whatever. It will hurt a little bit.
- Do I need many stiches?
x No. I think two shoud be enough.
Well, there you go. Don't forget to clean the wound a couple times a day. And change the bandage everyday. Don't forget to desinfect about three times a day and the bandage has to be changed everyday.
- Ofcourse, thank you doctor!
- You're welcome. Be careful next time!
- I will.



Well.. hopelijk heb ik het goed verbeterd, want moet dit jaar wel mijn Cambridge examen halen en dan moet ik dit wel weten :'D
(Als je wilt weten waarom iets fout is moet je het even zeggen, leg ik het uit. Want I rode a bike is wel een huge mistake voor als je 15 bent en dus in de 3e/4e zit)

[ bericht aangepast op 27 sep 2011 - 19:11 ]

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A king can rule a kingdom, but happiness will rule the

Patronum schreef:
(...)

Ik snap die Too niet, aan het begin?
Die moet daar niet staan -inhoudelijk- en als je hem toch plaatst, staat ie verkeerd...

Ho, moest zijn; doesn't look too goed.
Haha, foutje. Maar het klinkt iets beter, maar is niet nodig ;]

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In the end the only person we love is ourselves, that's why we choose to love someone who can please us the most.

Endure schreef:
(...)

Ho, moest zijn; doesn't look too goed.
Haha, foutje. Maar het klinkt iets beter, maar is niet nodig ;]

het is good.

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Then I defy thee, stars. Romeo Montague

- Hello Doctor, could you help me, please?
x Ofcourse. Let me see.
- It's my hand. It's bleeding and it hurts a little.
x That doesn't look good. What happened to you?
- It's quite of a strange story.
x It's better if you tell me, so I can help you better.
- Well, I rode the bike to school when a cat came out of nowhere. I wasn't prepared, so I tried to avoid the cat and then I fell to the ground.
x But your wound is really deep. Was there something lying on the round?
- Yes, a piece of glass.
x I see. I think we need to stitch you. The wound is too deep.
- Really? I think that's unnecessary. It doesn't hurt that much.
x I'm sorry, but it's really necessary. I'm gonna take some disinfectant spray to clean it up. It will hurt a little bit.
- Do I need many/a lot of stitches?
x No. I think two should be enough.
Well, here you go. Don't forget to clean the wound a couple times a day. And change the bandage everyday.
- Ofcourse, thank you doctor!
- You're welcome. Be careful next time!
- I will.

Als ik wat vergeten ben/slecht heb gedaan, feel free to adjust.

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No growth of the heart is ever a waste

Sanity schreef:
(...)

het is good.

Dat weet ik ook weeeel n__n -zucht-

@C18; Lol, dat ik die should over het hoofd gezien heb ;p

[ bericht aangepast op 27 sep 2011 - 19:13 ]

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In the end the only person we love is ourselves, that's why we choose to love someone who can please us the most.