• nja, mn vorige topic had ik per ongeluk verwijderd xD
    duss, ik vind t wel leuk om gedichten/songteskten te schrijven, maar ik vind t zelf niet echt goedd.
    hier zijn er een paar :

    I am locked inside a room
    With no windows, no way to run
    Everyday, I can feel the knife
    Slitting me, and making scars
    Few more days and I'll be gone
    The family I belonged to,
    Considers me a family no more
    The room I was locked in
    Will no longer exist


    Trying to control the thoughts in my head
    Forgetting everything your voice ever said
    Lieing to myself and drowning in my blood
    Letting your presence drown me in your flood
    Wandering about in this fake empty space
    Wondering aloud why I live in this state
    If I would dare give in, just let it go
    There's just one thing I want you to know
    I'm there in your heart, deep inside
    I'll always be your place to hide
    Even if I'm my own suicide...
    kill me,
    bring bullets to my heart.
    kiss me,
    make me shiver in the dark.
    just stay by my side,
    when i feel like run and hide.
    then you'll be sure i love you,
    then you'll know i'll never leave you.
    Whatever makes you happy
    I'd fly to the moon to do
    Cause if you'd ever shed a tear
    I'd crawl miles just to save you
    Now why can't you see me
    The way I can see you
    I'll love you for eternity
    You know I'll always love you
    Take me in, make me feel safe
    Keep me away from this place
    Smother me from head to toe
    Nobody even has to know
    Take my hand and hold it tight
    Keep me warm all through the night
    I'll never let you break me down
    Just promise me you'll stay around
    Sometimes she crawls into her thoughts
    Blocking out the world, her pain
    The glares, she can't even see
    Her thoughts racing like a train
    Although no one can notice
    You've never seen her arms
    She takes all her pain out on herself
    She's the only one she harms
    One night she sees that shining object
    Prettier than the blades
    She wishes that she doesn't make a mess
    Not realizing the mistake she's made

    kunnen wel wat engels fouten in zitten (A)
    maar misschien heeft iemand tips =D?
    of is t zo slecht dat ik beter kan stoppen xD?
    gr.simon!


    nothing's ever built to last

    Trying to control the thoughts in my head

    Forgetting everything your voice ever said

    Lieing to myself and drowning in my blood

    Letting your presence drown me in your flood

    Wandering about in this fake empty space

    Wondering aloud why I live in this state

    If I would dare give in, just let it go

    There's just one thing I want you to know

    I'm there in your heart, deep inside

    I'll always be your place to hide

    Even if I'm my own suicide...

    die vindt ik het mooiste =)

    ik vindt ze leuk!!

    Ik vind ze mooi.
    Je vindt het misschien zelf niet goed maar dat zijn ze wel hoor!


    ~hana wa sakura kimi wa utsukushi...

    Ze zijn goed hoor! ;D

    x


    Scream for mercy!