Voor FLE (soort Engels) moest ik een plaatje zoeken ter inspiratie en vervolgens een gedicht schrijven. Nou heb ik wat, maar volgens mij is het crap en kan het beter, maar weet nog niet goed hoe. Daarom vraag ik jullie ervaren schrijvers om hulp :'D
Grief
Feeling blown away by the wind, lonely in the sky,
crushed down by sorrow, pain and distress.
Drowning in the tears which slipped of my cheeks,
while you whisper courage in my ear.
Your warmth embraces me, holds me.
Eyes which tell me more than your lips do,
hypnotizes me, keeps me standing here,
while you’re silently leaving me behind.
“No need to cry”
The last few words you spoke, before leaving.
My answer, the last thing that left my lips,
my last goodbye, last message to you.
So you’ll realize and maybe come back once.
“I’m here waiting for you”
Until that time, I wait for the roses to bloom again,
the spring to come, the snow to finally melt away.
I’ll wait for your comeback, be strong, stand my ground,
and keep remembering myself in silence;
“There’s no need to cry”
[ bericht aangepast op 26 sep 2011 - 21:07 ]
In the end the only person we love is ourselves, that's why we choose to love someone who can please us the most.
