Eigen songtekst - Muziek

ik moest een songtekst maken voor muziek. Maar ik liet hem aan een paar mensen zien en eigenlijk vonden ze hem best wel goed.
Me moeder zei half voor de grap. Je moet hem opsturen.
Zou natuurlijk wel vet zijn als er een singeltje komt.
Wat vinden jullie ?

Danmarks Dynamite.

Ik wil eerst zien, daarna geloven

Every word written is a victory against death | Michel Butor

Ik heb de songtekst niet gelezen, dus ik kan er nogal weinig over zeggen. -hint hint-

I know there's a way so I promise: 'I'm gonna clean up the mess I made'

Lickilicky schreef:
Ik wil eerst zien, daarna geloven

there is a certain beauty in setting the world on fire and watching from the center of the flames.

Waarvan?
Je bent denk ik vergeten de songetekst erbij te zetten, haha

WHEN YOUR GONE –


I’m telling my own story ,
It’s about you and me.
My love for you is stronger ,
Then you can ever see.
My life is telling secrets ,
Like a big secretbook.
And now you see me with a different look.


This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

RAP
I’m choosing for the left side ,
But go to the other.
I’m telling you the truth ,
And looking to your mother.
So listen to me ,
This is how it should be.
We love eachother ,
And your going to be father.

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

And i’m walking in the rain ,
thinking what you say.
You will never come back ,
Was this the last day ?

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

And now i have a baby ,
I’m looking to the little lady.
For ever you’re in my heart.
It would be a place apart.
When she’s older ,
She ask me one with thing ,
When she’s sitting on my shoulder ?
Are you ready ,
Who is my daddy ?

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

Danmarks Dynamite.

Wow!! Hij is idd mooi, maar is dit een echte gevoel of kregen jullie iets waar jullie een songtekst van moesten maken?

nee , het is wel echt een gevoel.

Danmarks Dynamite.

Het is een prachtige songtekst en ik kan enkel zeggen: niet geprobeert is altijd verloren

The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed - One Direction, What Makes You Beautiful

Sommige stukjes vind ik goed en andere niet.
Ik vind hem eerlijk gezegd niet heel speciaal om op te sturen

Stop being afraid of what could go wrong and start being positive about what could go right

Negligible schreef:
Sommige stukjes vind ik goed en andere niet.
Ik vind hem eerlijk gezegd niet heel speciaal om op te sturen

I'll lick the poison from right off your kiss

KendallxBTR schreef:
WHEN YOUR GONE –


I’m telling my own story ,
It’s about you and me.
My love for you is stronger ,
Then you can ever see.
My life is telling secrets ,
Like a big secretbook.
And now you see me with a different look.


This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

RAP
I’m choosing for the left side ,
But go to the other.
I’m telling you the truth ,
And looking to your mother.
So listen to me ,
This is how it should be.
We love eachother ,
And your going to be father.

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

And i’m walking in the rain ,
thinking what you say.
You will never come back ,
Was this the last day ?

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

And now i have a baby ,
I’m looking to the little lady.
For ever you’re in my heart.
It would be a place apart.
When she’s older ,
She ask me one with thing ,
When she’s sitting on my shoulder ?
Are you ready ,
Who is my daddy ?

This love is stronger than they ever say
it's just like we're playing in our own play
We don’t look back and move on ,
If there is a price for love , then we won.
My love , my love , my love for you .. (2x)

And at last, all the pictures have been burned. And all the past, is just a lesson that we've learned.

super!!!!! Niet geschoten altijd mis!! xxx

[ bericht aangepast op 3 sep 2011 - 20:41 ]

Be Your Own Anchor

Het is mooi, maar 'when your gone' bestaat al? Dus je kan hem 'my love, my price' noemen?

And remember that, in a world of ordinary mortals, you are a Wonder Woman.

Uneventful schreef:
Het is mooi, maar 'when your gone' bestaat al? Dus je kan hem 'my love, my price' noemen?

Danmarks Dynamite.

Ik denk persoonlijk dat Rap niet bij je songtekst past. Tenminste niet hoe ik het zie.

Ex astris, sciencia