Ik heb een gedichtje gemaakt, maar ik heb even een mening nodig, en eventueel advies wat beter kan.
&& ja, ik heb een of twee stukjes van twitter af, omdat ik die mooi vond (: .
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, ‘It’s going to be okay.’
And the way you're always there.
So I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
Then I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
Eventually I wrote your name in my heart,
and I know, forever it will stay.
I have poured my entire heart to you, right from the start.
And my love continues to grow,
with each passing day.
So whenever we say goodbye,
whenever we part,
know I hold you dearly,
deep inside my heart.
Hold me in the springtime, when all is green and new,
Hold me in the summer, when the sky is blue,
Hold me in the autumn, when the leaves are turning brown,
Hold me in the winter, when the snow is falling down.
Eternity is a only step away.
Thankyou (:
I hope heaven needs you more than I do now.
