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  • 18 jan 2014 - 11:35   LaDispute is offline
    LaDispute
    LaDispute 317

    Scars

    Like red snakes on my soft skin
    so soft as silk
    I wish I could erase them
    en never see it again
    I wish I could stop
    Stop with cutting and hating myself
    But I'm lost
    Lost in my own mind

    voor Floor.

    [ bericht aangepast op 18 jan 2014 - 11:35 ]

    "I thought I heard a plane crashing, but now I think it was your passion snapping" - La Dispute

    18 jan 2014 - 11:37   LaDispute is offline
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    LaDispute 317

    Ben heel benieuwd wat jullie ervan vinden! kritiek mag ook ;)

    [ bericht aangepast op 18 jan 2014 - 12:32 ]

    "I thought I heard a plane crashing, but now I think it was your passion snapping" - La Dispute

    25 jan 2014 - 22:36   Derks is offline
    Derks
    Derks 7886

    Heel mooi gedicht,

    een opmerking, de 4e regel begint met "en"
    Moet dit niet "and" zijn ?

    so if you care to find me, look to the western sky, as someone told me lately: everyone deserves a chance to fly




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