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  • 6 sep 2011 - 14:53   Prim is offline
    Prim
    Prim 10953

    If people ask if I'm all right.
    They know the answer already.
    I will always say that I'm okay.
    I will never say the truth.

    People have to see me strong.
    I can't be weak.
    If I'm weak.
    People catch me.

    That's why I'm hiding.
    Always behind the wall.
    The wall of my life.
    The wall that has to protect me.

    When I'm alone.
    That wall is gone.
    Then I'm saying that I'm not all right.
    Then I'm crying.

    But the next morning.
    I built the wall again.
    So I can hide myself.
    Between the wall of smile.

    [ bericht aangepast op 6 sep 2011 - 15:19 ]

    L.S.H.I.F.O.M.D.W.I.D.H.O. Laughing so hard I fell off my dinosaur, wait, I don't have one

    6 sep 2011 - 14:56   Scharry is offline
    Scharry
    Scharry 4828

    Wauw.
    Ik kan niet meer zeggen.

    Food.

    6 sep 2011 - 14:56   Prim is offline
    Prim
    Prim 10953

    Avil schreef:
    Wauw.
    Ik kan niet meer zeggen.

    Dankje
    Ik heb al een poosje niet meer gedicht, maar deze kwam er opeens uit rollen

    L.S.H.I.F.O.M.D.W.I.D.H.O. Laughing so hard I fell off my dinosaur, wait, I don't have one

    6 sep 2011 - 15:01   Queensbury is offline
    Queensbury
    Queensbury 24091

    Prachtig (flower)

    "No matter where you are in the world, the moon is never bigger than your thumb" - Dear John

    6 sep 2011 - 15:02   Queensbury is offline
    Queensbury
    Queensbury 24091

    Alleen, in het eerste couplet, staat wil, dat moet toch will zijn? ;$

    "No matter where you are in the world, the moon is never bigger than your thumb" - Dear John

    6 sep 2011 - 15:11   UZI is offline
    UZI
    UZI 1131

    Écht mooi:3

    May the sun bring you new energy by day, may the moon softly restore you by night, may the rain wash away your worries.

    6 sep 2011 - 15:18   ONEOKROCK is offline
    ONEOKROCK
    ONEOKROCK 5267

    Mooi (:

    Maar just saying;
    "The wall that has to protect me.

    When I'm alone.
    That wall is gone.
    Then I'm saying that I'm not all right.
    Then I'm crying."
    In het eerste couplet moet wil inderdaad met dubbel l zijn
    En misschien "people will catch me" maar ik weet niet of dat de bedoeling was van 't gedicht ;o

    Maar hij is erg mooi :3


    Sorry, ik heb altijd de neiging om te verbeteren

    [ bericht aangepast op 6 sep 2011 - 15:19 ]

    "Robbing someone of their smile and putting it on your face doesn’t make you happy." - Tablo




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