LiveIsHard
LiveIsHard
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dorpje vlakbij Rotterdam
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I love twilight
I love music. (van alles en nog wat)
I my bff jazz.
I'm a kind of an emo.
FAKE OR REAL FRIENDS
FAKE FRIENDS: Never ask for food.
REAL FRIENDS: are the reasons you have no food.
FAKE FRIENDS: Call your parents Mr/Mrs
REAL FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOM
FAKE FRIENDS: bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.
REAL FRIENDS: Would sit next to you saying "Damn ... we fucked up ... but that shit was fun!"
FAKE FRIENDS: never seen you cry.
REAL FRIENDS: cry with you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back.
REAL FRIENDS: keep your shit so long they forget its yours.
FAKE FRIENDS: know a few things about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
REAL FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door.
REAL FRIENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME!"
FAKE FRIENDS: Are for a while.
REAL FRIENDS: Are for life.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will take your drink away when they think you've had enough.
REAL FRIENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place and say "Bitch drink the rest of that you know we don't waste shit."
FAKE FRIENDS: will talk shit to the person who talks shit about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Will knock them the fuck out
FAKE FRIENDS: Will read this.
REAL FRIENDS: Will steal this, just like I did
I love music. (van alles en nog wat)
I my bff jazz.
I'm a kind of an emo.
FAKE OR REAL FRIENDS
FAKE FRIENDS: Never ask for food.
REAL FRIENDS: are the reasons you have no food.
FAKE FRIENDS: Call your parents Mr/Mrs
REAL FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOM
FAKE FRIENDS: bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.
REAL FRIENDS: Would sit next to you saying "Damn ... we fucked up ... but that shit was fun!"
FAKE FRIENDS: never seen you cry.
REAL FRIENDS: cry with you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back.
REAL FRIENDS: keep your shit so long they forget its yours.
FAKE FRIENDS: know a few things about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
REAL FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door.
REAL FRIENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME!"
FAKE FRIENDS: Are for a while.
REAL FRIENDS: Are for life.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will take your drink away when they think you've had enough.
REAL FRIENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place and say "Bitch drink the rest of that you know we don't waste shit."
FAKE FRIENDS: will talk shit to the person who talks shit about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Will knock them the fuck out
FAKE FRIENDS: Will read this.
REAL FRIENDS: Will steal this, just like I did
just ask and i anser
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oke ik zal proberen het zo snel mogelijk te schrijven
1 decennium geledenmaar ik zit momenteel in Andorra en dan gaat het wel wat trager gaan omdat ik overdag niet op de laptop ga gaan
xxx
jhaa proficiat
1 decennium geledenjij reageerde eerst dus je mag kiezen waarover het volgende verhaaltje gaat
xxx
Oké hier komen de tips:
1 decennium geleden1. Probeer de hoofdstukjes iets langer te maken.
2. Let op spelfouten en leestekens (niet dat ik die zo veel gevonden heb bij jou, maar dit is altijd een goede tip)
3. Probeer wat meer details in je stukje te verwerken. (anders krijg je dat er elk moment dingen gebeuren, terwijl je er eigenlijk niet zo veel van weet.)
4. Probeer wat meer gevoelens en gedachten er in te verwerken.
Goed, meer tips heb ik niet!
Het is een leuk bedacht verhaal, dus veel succes!
Een extra tip is wel: Je kan een Template maken voor je verhaal, dan word het wat kleurrijker van, en dan is het leuker om te lezen. (je zou ook plaatjes kunnen gebruiken.)
xx.
1 decennium geledenBedankt voor het melden, ik zal hem morgen gelijk lezen!
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