My own written song;$! - Muziek

You and me, was like a fairytale.
It was only you and me, but now are different days.
We don't have a relation with sunshine.
But a broken heart with alot of tears.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I miss the times that I had with you.
With you in my arms is everything so easy.
But I don't live in your arms.
I live in the real world, where you never come back in my arms.

You and me, was like a fairytale.
It was only you and me, but now are different days.
We don't have a relation with sunshine.
But a broken heart with alot of tears.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I remember the time under A tree, with beautiful candle light.
That time was amazing. It feels I was in heaven.
But I realise, that feeling never comes back.

You and me, was like a fairytale.
It was only you and me, but now are different days.
We don't have a relation with sunshine.
But a broken heart with alot of tears.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I miss the times that I had with you.
With you in my arms is everything so easy.
But I don't live in your arms.
I live in the real world, where you never come back in my arms.

You and me, was like a fairytale.
It was only you and me, but now are different days.
We don't have a relation with sunshine.
But a broken heart with alot of tears.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

Naja, dit was him ;$
Hij is nog niet af, maar wat vinden jullie?
kan ik beter stoppen of doorgaan?

xx

I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you co

Nobody?

I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you co

YoYoBANAAN schreef:
You and me, was like a fairytale.
It was only you and me, but now are different days.
We don't have a relation with sunshine.
But a broken heart with alot of tears.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I miss the times that I had with you.
With you in my arms is everything so easy.
But I don't live in your arms.
I live in the real world, where you never come back in my arms.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I remember the time under A tree, with beautiful candle light.
That time was amazing. It feels I was in heaven.
But I realise, that feeling never comes back.

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

I miss the times that I had with you.
With you in my arms is everything so easy.
But I don't live in your arms.
I live in the real world, where you never come back in my arms

I hate that I love you.
I can't get you out my mind.
It feels like yesterday, that I was by you.
But there alot of days ago sinds I was with you.

Naja, dit was him ;$
Hij is nog niet af, maar wat vinden jullie?
kan ik beter stoppen of doorgaan?

xx

I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you co

WOW dat is echt heeeeel goed vind ikke(flower)

keep going mis moet je hem op je profiel zetten als je dat al niet gedaan hebt
F je kunt hem een keer naar een producer opsturen(dance)

xxxx i like it!!!

love is a rollercoaster you just have to ride it

cutePIE schreef:
WOW dat is echt heeeeel goed vind ikke(flower)

keep going mis moet je hem op je profiel zetten als je dat al niet gedaan hebt
F je kunt hem een keer naar een producer opsturen(dance)

xxxx i like it!!!

I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you co

dta is echt heel erg goed!!
je hebt echt talent

Every scrap of you would be taken from me, watched as you signed your name Marjorie

Waauw,

Je bent echt goed!
Doorgaan ofcourse ^.^

misschien moet je er eens mee naar een platenmaatschappij gaan ofzo
ga ik binnen 3 dagen ook doen,
ik zal wel eens zeggen waar

Er zitten vrij veel fouten in het engels in en in de zinsopbouw en ik vind het persoonlijk niet heel erg vloeiend. Veel zinnen zijn te lang of sluiten niet lekker aan, dus dat zit mij dwars. Het springt ook een beetje van hot naar her, er zit niet echt een.. logische volgorde in. Ik vind hem persoonlijk niet heel erg goed, maar dat is mijn mening, meningen verschillen nou eenmaal, sorry..

If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything.

Zoals hierboven gezegd wordt. Er zitten veel fouten, qua zinsopbouw en het heeft geen logische volgorde. Ik kan het nog een vers noemen. En er staat in één strofe teveel "you" en dat zit me ook dwars. Misschien moet je een paar woorden laten rijmen, en het tenminste op een liedje laten lijken? En toch maar meer oefenen met Nederlands. Aangezien Engels niet zo vlot gaat.

We love because he loved us first - John 4:19