Heey.^^
Ik heb een gedicht geschreven, maar ik vind dat ie beter kan. Mening?
In the land of angels
nothing but love
nothing but passion
so far above
The land
where the sun is allways shining
with it's light
to feed the flowers
the sources of happiness
The place
where good and bad
are the same
where there is no opposite for love
where they don't care about
race, nor believes
because everyone is the same
and everything they believe in
becomes reality
The land of angels
so far away
you and me
we will never see it
for we don't know
how to love
how to give
nor how to respect
the land of angels
will be a fantasy
forever
Niet alleen zeggen dat ie mooi is ofzo, want er kan altijd wel iets beter.
Maar don't kill me, dit is pas het 3e gedicht ofzo dat ik ooit heb geschreven 
Thnx, xx
Everything means nothing, if I ain't got you.
