Story: kate(lynn's) version of twilight, the sister of Bella(english)

The story is about the sister of Bella who lived with her aunt until she died, but now that her aunt has passed away, she has to go to her father Charlie and her sister Bella who live in Forks. She hates everything about Forks, the rain, the clouds and the gloominess. The only thing she loves is the forest. She is a champion runner and has won nationals, but she can't compete in competitions anymore because Charlie can't drive her to the places, for the competitions. So she had to give up on the thing she loved the most and is very upset about it. But determined as she is, she keeps running and training and is going to compete anyway when she is 18, so she can go on her own. Charlie isn't fancied about the whole idea and try's to talk the idea out of her head.
She is 1 year younger than Bella so she is 17 and this evolves around Eclipse, so I’m sorry if things are wrong but I’m doing my best. I have only seen the films and I’m reading Twilight in English now.

Hoofdstukken

Titel Nieuwste eerst Woorden Gelezen Aangepast
Chapter 1. Going to Forks 1359 182 1 decennium geleden
Chapter 2. My first day at school 1564 230 1 decennium geleden
Chapter 3. My weird dream 1639 162 1 decennium geleden
Chapter 4. The memory that scares me 767 168 1 decennium geleden
Chapter 5. The hospital and Paul 1151 177 1 decennium geleden

Reageer (4)

  • AppleTart

    Ik doe TVWO
    ga dit zeker lezen
    (nerd)

    1 decennium geleden
  • xRenatex

    Well because it's an English story and because of this I'm turning into an English mood, I'm going to response in English.
    I think it would be a wonderful story and I'm looking forward to read it.
    There's one tiny thing: conpetitions -> competitions
    I thaugt I might tell you because I think that word is going to return in your story.
    I'll probably have some mistakes in this too.
    Hugs and Kisses

    1 decennium geleden
  • flynnie

    lijkt me een erg leuk verhaal laat het me weten waneer je je eerste hoofdstuk hebt geschreven

    1 decennium geleden
  • montymarijuana

    ik kijk wel of de eerste hoofdstuk makelijk omte lezen is
    dan ga ik mischien veder okey

    1 decennium geleden

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