12 - Moving On
Fin. I hope you enjoyed this feel-good story as much as I enjoyed envisioning it c:
(I would say "writing it" but sometimes writing can be a pain in the behind : P)
..............the thing that you will probably notice is based on a comment made by Sam in 11x04 and I felt bad for poor Sam and then I thought "meh, it's my story, why not." Don't be mad. :')))
(I would say "writing it" but sometimes writing can be a pain in the behind : P)
..............the thing that you will probably notice is based on a comment made by Sam in 11x04 and I felt bad for poor Sam and then I thought "meh, it's my story, why not." Don't be mad. :')))
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Oh! I do have one thing to say - if you want other people to read the stories, you could maybe edit the, like, cover-pages of this & Family Business, so that there's also a summery?? The extra comments on the story are great and all, but I think it's mostly a summery - ish thing that draws people in. But maybe you were already planning on doing that later, I dunno. Anyway, this is lovely. You really got me feeling for all the characters so much - I hope Amriël & Balthazar will be reunited, and Sam & Olivia will call sometimes - he needs someone in his life, damnit (oh, is that what you were referring to? Sam's comment about having something with a hunter/someone who knows the life? yes good). And, and Amriëls baby! That kid will have some WEIRD genetics. :p
8 jaar geledenThat was a wild ride......I love it : D
8 jaar geledenHonestly I don't have any complaints, this was perfect. Although I'm not sure what you mean by the author's note on this chapter- what should I not be mad about? I have missed something