Story: kate(lynn's) version of twilight, the sister of Bella(english)
The story is about the sister of Bella who lived with her aunt until she died, but now that her aunt has passed away, she has to go to her father Charlie and her sister Bella who live in Forks. She hates everything about Forks, the rain, the clouds and the gloominess. The only thing she loves is the forest. She is a champion runner and has won nationals, but she can't compete in competitions anymore because Charlie can't drive her to the places, for the competitions. So she had to give up on the thing she loved the most and is very upset about it. But determined as she is, she keeps running and training and is going to compete anyway when she is 18, so she can go on her own. Charlie isn't fancied about the whole idea and try's to talk the idea out of her head.
She is 1 year younger than Bella so she is 17 and this evolves around Eclipse, so I’m sorry if things are wrong but I’m doing my best. I have only seen the films and I’m reading Twilight in English now.
Hoofdstukken
Titel Nieuwste eerst | Woorden | Gelezen | Aangepast | Chapter 1. Going to Forks | 1359 | 183 | 1 decennium geleden | Chapter 2. My first day at school | 1564 | 233 | 1 decennium geleden | Chapter 3. My weird dream | 1639 | 164 | 1 decennium geleden | Chapter 4. The memory that scares me | 767 | 170 | 1 decennium geleden | Chapter 5. The hospital and Paul | 1151 | 180 | 1 decennium geleden |
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Ik doe TVWO
1 decennium geledenga dit zeker lezen
Well because it's an English story and because of this I'm turning into an English mood, I'm going to response in English.
1 decennium geledenI think it would be a wonderful story and I'm looking forward to read it.
There's one tiny thing: conpetitions -> competitions
I thaugt I might tell you because I think that word is going to return in your story.
I'll probably have some mistakes in this too.
Hugs and Kisses
lijkt me een erg leuk verhaal laat het me weten waneer je je eerste hoofdstuk hebt geschreven
1 decennium geledenik kijk wel of de eerste hoofdstuk makelijk omte lezen is
1 decennium geledendan ga ik mischien veder okey