~ 03. ~
This chapter is for my little niece,
because Rose reminds me unbelievably much of her.
Enjoy reading and please leave comments,
so I can correct my English or explain something that isn't clear.
Xxxx Marith
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Reageer (4)
You know, that in English all the things better sounds than in Dutch? <3 I love that, for example: 'her voice broke' I mean: 'haar stem breekt' sounds like a cliche sence in Dutch.. And Dutch sounds ugly, so it's a ugly cliche sense that sounds empty!
But in English it's an emotional lovely sense with so much passion <3 Love that! <3 But this is not the most important thing of this reaction, that is your style of writing.. You said in my reaction like, I know your style now and get used to it and you know... By myself it's the same <3 And the most important thing, haha, is that I can see yourself in this story, yes, you wrote it, but it's like.. this is the outside, the story is the outside, and your the inside.. You understand? You shines through the story <3 And that's so beautiful! It's so beautiful when you can write with your own peculiarity, that what makes you unique (: And that is shining through your story right now, when I read your story I see that <3 LOVE IT! <3
1 decennium geledenI promise to read as fast as I can (: Because this story deverses that, and that means that you deserves that <3
Lotsoflove. x
Don't know what to say...
1 decennium geledenAmazing! Rose is echt schattig!
1 decennium geledenwaauw opnieuw weer supergoed!! En die Rose is lief!
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