[2]noem je tijd, noem je plaats.

Schrijver:	larisssrose
Titel:	[2]noem je tijd, noem je plaats.
Onderdeel van:	Ich liebe dich. :$ [TH]
Bijgewerkt:	1 decennium geleden
Geactiveerd:	1 decennium geleden
Leeftijd:	AL
Genre:	Onbekende personen, Romantiek, Stand Alone
Woorden:	470
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ik loop buiten op weg naar de winkel. moest weer eens persee boodschappen doen voor mn ouders. pfoe soms word ik helemaal gek van ze. ik wil snel terug want ik was net lekker aan het praten met tom. ik ken hem amper maar na die paar uurtjes praten lijkt het of ik hem al jaren ken. Rijst..Rijst..Rijst. aah daarzo.
''dat word dan 2.30 alstublieft'' alstublieft haha net of ik oud ben ofzoiets. ''alstublieft mevrouw'' zeg ik. ''fijne middag nog'' ik loop de winkel uit zo snel mogenlijk terug naar huis. ''hee tom!'' ondertussen zet ik een liedje aan van michael jackson en zing luidkeels mee. ''gutentag! schoonheid'' haha. schoonheid hij moest eens weten wat voor wezen ik ben ^^ ''schoonheid? in je dromen. ooit een heks gezien, daar heb ik veel van weg hoor'' 'dat moet je niet over jezelf zeggen. ik weet zeker dat de hele school onder je voeten ligt. ik zie het aan de manier waarop je tiept ^^'' hij zou moeten weten hoeveel mensen *ahum* aan mn voeten liggen. no-one ofc
''whaha je moest uss weten. (niet goed bedoeld hoor)''

Tom POV.
''Hee bill ken je ene larissa?'' vraag ik bill met een vragend gezicht. Het is even stil tot de stem van bill oppeens heel hard door de kamer galmt'Uhm ja!! die ken ik wel die zit op onze school je weet wel dat meisje met dat zwarte haar en roze highlights'' ik denk na. ik weet het eff. niet maar dan oppeens schiet het me te binnen. ''oow jaa! ik weet het weer. dat meisje die vorige keer huilend een boek in een hoekje van de gang zat te lezen?' 'tsjaa, dat meisje word ook niet altijd even goed behandeld tommie'' waarna die woorden ik oppeens iets hoor. het is het geluid van msn. ze praat weer. ''hallo ben je dood or something?'' zegt ze. 'nou vertel maar dan. hoeveel mensen liggen er aan jou voeten?'' ''jaa nou uhmm.' ik denk dat ik maar beter kan vertellen dat ik het allemaal allang al weet wat dit begint zielig te worden.
''sorry dat ik zoveel vraag' ''het geeft niet tom. je mag het best weten'' het is even stil. ''meisje. ik weet het allemaal al. ik vroeg net aan bill of hij je kende enzo. ik heb je een keer zien huilen toen je een boek aan het lezen was. je word gepest he?'' ''jaa''

Larissa POV.
hij voelt zo vertrouwt aan. ik kan het niet laten en zeg dat ik hem graag wil zien. ''ik wil jou ook heel graag zien.' antwoord hij. waarom doet deze jongen zo lief? waarschijnlijk alleen omdat ik het zielige meisje ben. en hij me ook gewoon daarna zwart wilt gaan maken. ''noem je tijd,noem je plaats?' zegt tom. ''overmorgen. 4uur schoolplein' antwoord ik. ''is goed ik zie je daar.'

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larisssrose
jhuua.
ik haat hoofdletters en shit.
maar ik zal er op lette ^^
xoxo
1 decennium geleden
Hiding
Hey het is wel goed , maar probeer een beetje op te letten op:

Hoofdletters aan het begin van de zin. Dat leest wat makkelijker voor de mensen die het lezen ,
En ook bij de namen.

Verder is het wel goed !
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Scarhead
als tom dat doet, dan euh.. ja iets dat ik ng niet weet ;o
snel verder (:
1 decennium geleden
larisssrose
Vervolg kom misschien nog wel.
ligt eraan of iemand het ooit leest ^.^
3reactie's is verder..
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